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关于模板，与 10天突破雅思作文
因为内力不济，大部分考生在上考场之前都会准备好自己得模板来做报名护身符，而10天突破雅思作文 就是这样一本九阴白骨爪的上乘武学。
它从词到句再到骨架，最后到模板，全部都给了考生。
可是我想说的是，大家要想无忌哥哥那样，把什么都忘记了才是最高境界。
让我们来看看，雅思要什么？
1 Art andliterature represent that whether onecountry possesses a civilized cultural standing. 2 That is the reason why some people think thatcreators should produce works under the circumstance without any restriction.3 Increasingly however,others consider that those works always transcend the moral codes and need some schemes to manage this phenomenon. 4 In this essay, I will examine some of the arguments for andagainst whether governments shouldinterfereartists as well as their works.
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1 From ancient times, Art and literature play an important role inthe process of one country development. 2TakeRenaissancefor example, it claims free creation without anyrestraint and emphasizesthe feelings of people.3 Undoubtedly, we indeed appreciate manymasterpieces from the period of Renaissance. 4 Furthermore,it affects art and literatureprofoundly andalso brings the advance of the arts. 5 Thus, governments should support artists rather thanrestricting them.
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1 On the other hand, both the arts andpornography lack of clear definition.2 More precisely,some genres, such as films, literatures andpainting frequently exceed the standards of moral,which affect the thought of audiences even cause criminal behaviors. 3 That is to say, it is of vitalimportance that authorities should institute proper censorship as well asclassification, which not only protect underagechildren but also promote the quality of arts.
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1 In conclusion, I agree that artistsdefinitely need a amplespace which help them create great masterpiece.2 Yet I amfully convinced that appropriatecensorship and classification are necessary. Itwill continue to benefit every audience as wellasthe field of art and literature.
这是一篇雅思作文得例文，
::16::16::16::16::16::16::16::16红色部分 是这边文章得骨架，亦可以说能够当模板得部分
2 模板分析
首段
1） 引出论文。2）改写争论（套用模板Some people think…..increasingly however, others consider that….）3) 表述自己的观点（模板 In this essay ,I will examine some of the arguments for and againstwhether…）
让步段
1) 正方观点2）举例（模板 Take …for example,）3)一系列递进关系句子（模板 undoubtedly,….Furthermore…..Thus….）
主题段
1） 反方观点（模板，one the other hand）2)论述举例（递进模板 More precisely….such as…..
That is to say….which not only ….but also)
结尾
1） 写论断（模板,递进句In conclusion, I agreed that…. Yet I am full convinced that….）
2） 结句（It will continue to be benefit…as well as….）
紫色部分，是所谓得高级词汇
:funk:好词，好句句子大搜集
1） others consider that those worksalways transcend the moral codes and need someschemes to manage this phenomenon.
Transcendthe moral codes: 超出道德底线=exceed the standards of moral（提升用词多样性）
Scheme：
计划，安排
Tomanager this phenomenon: 控制这种现象
2） play an important role in theprocess of one country development 国家发展过程中占有重要角色。
3） it claims free creation withoutany restraint and emphasizes the feelings of people
restraint:克制
emphasizes: 强调
4） indeed appreciate，vital importance 加强语气词
5） profoundly= deeply Ample=lot提升用词难度
6） underage 未成年人
7） definitely,
